cooper brock 2011 portfolio
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COOPER BROCK1711 South Summerlin Avenue
Orlando FL, [email protected]
(407) 284-9973
May 27, 2011
Renee BurkeHi-Lights Newspaper Advisor2000 Mills Ave.Orlando FL, 32806
Dear Mrs. Burke:
I understand that the Hi-Lights newspaper staff is losing a lot of experience heading into this coming year. I believe my two years of experience in journalism would be of value to you in this predicament, and I ask that you accept this resume for your con-sideration. As an experienced asset to my current high school paper, I effectively manage dead-lines, have experience behind the camera, and experience behind the keyboard, designing pages. As a staffer, I have not specialized in a certain area of the publication, instead allowing myself to become well rounded in all fields of journalism. As such, I would be able to fill any position available, and perform any task required of me.
Creativity is one of my strengths that I can apply directly to your publication. I en-joy the endless possibilities a good knowledge of adjectives provide, as shown in my FSPA All Florida award for newspaper reviews in 2011. I am very opinionated, which is reflected in my editorial pieces, printed in my high school paper. A position on your staff would give me a chance to gain experience working with others, and writing out of my comfort zone.
Although this letter and included resume can give you a basic idea of what I can do for you, I’d like to elaborate in person. I feel a chance to speak with you in person would paint a better picture of my skills and how I can be an asset to you and your publica-tions.Respectfully yours, Cooper Brock
COOPER BROCK1711 South Summerlin Avenue
Orlando FL, [email protected]
407-284-9973
OBJECTIVETo pursue creative interests in writing and design, produce an award winning publica-tion, and promote the flow of information as a member of the 2012 Hi-Lights staff.
EDUCATIONCompleted two years at William R. Boone High SchoolGraduation date: May 2013GPA: 3.0
EXPERIENCEBoone Hi-Lights Newspaper Staff• August 2009 – present. Wrote over 12 stories as a part of staff. Participated in rasing funds and taking photographs for the publication.Chic-fil-a • May 2011 – present. Served at front counter as a cashier, taking orders, provid-ing food, and providing further assistance.Christie Distribution• February 2011 – April 2011. Unboxed, packaged and labeled fair trade products created in India and Indonesia to be shipped nation-wide.
RELEVANT HIGH SCHOOL STUDIESJournalism II, Journalism III, Spanish I, Spanish II, Spanish III, English II Honors Gifted, and English I Honors Gifted.
HONORS, AWARDS, AND MEMBERSHIPS• FSPA All Florida Award: Newspaper Reviews 2011Award given in recognition of well written review. Highest FSPA honor in this catego-ry.• American Legion Award 2009Award given to those who show qualities of leadership, academic excellence and good character.• Scholar Athlete AwardAward presented to student athlete with highest highest GPA and involvement in ath-letic programs.
Afterfinishingupmysecondyearonstaff,Ihavecometorealizethatjournalismhasbecomesomuchmore
thanaclass,oraclubtome.Ithasbecomemylife.IhaveputmoretimeandeffortintothenewspaperstaffthanI
haveintotherestofmyclassescombined,butthatdoesn’treallymatter.Whatmattersis,thatIhavethoroughly
enjoyedeverysecondofit.
Ibecameinterestedinjournalismattheendof8thgrade,whenIwastryingtofigureoutwhatIwasgoing
todoforthenextfouryearsofmylife.Mysistersuggestedit,butInevergaveitseriousconsiderationuntilMadi-
sonSmithandElizabethCartwright,theEditorinchiefsofstaffatthetime,cameintomyEnglishclassroomand
enticedmewiththeirstoriesofwackymisadventuresonstaff.Iwasimmediatelydrawninaftertalkingatlength
withmysisteraboutthebenefitsofstaff.Afterapplying,andgettingaccepted,thefollowingyearwouldbeoneof
thetoughestbutmostrewardingyearsofmylife.
Iskippedthepre-requisiteJournalismIclass,whichmeantIwastopickuptherulesandprotocoloverthe
courseoftheyear.Itwasadisastrousyear,filledwithmisseddeadlinesandtruckloadsofstressforthosetryingto
helpme.ItwasthispastyearthatIbegantoachievesuccess,startingwithmakingmyfirstmetdeadlineonastory
thatendedupwinninganFSPAAllFloridaaward.Ifoundmyselfabletoanswerthenumerousrequestsforhelpfrom
thenewlyenlistedmembersofstaff.NottosaythatIwasn’tplaguedwithabitoftroublethisyear,butIfeelIhave
takenlargestepstogetwhereIamnow.
Comingintothisnext,thirdyearonstaff,myfeelingstowardsjournalismhavechanged,andstayedthe
same.Istillharboraloveforjournalism,justadifferentkindoflove.Inmyfreshmanyear,Iwasanxioustolearnand
becomeapartofthejournalisticprocess¬,andafterfinishingupmysecondyear,mypassionhasgainedanunder-
standingofwhatjournalismreallyis.Ilooktonextyearimpatiently,eagertosharewhatIhavelearnedwiththose
takingtheirfirststepsintojournalism.
Thiswasthemoreproductiveyearofmytwoasamemberofstaff.Ilearnedalotaboutmakingdeadline,
organizing,andsettingtimeasideforwork.
Duringmysecondyear,Imademyfirsttwodeadlines,afeatIhadnotpreviouslyperformed.Alotofthe
reasonIactuallymadedeadline,wasbecauseIwasproactiveaboutgettingthestorydone.Igatheredthenecessary
informationbeforepeeredits,andIworkedonthestoryathomebetweendeadlines.Ilearnedthatbeingonstaffisa
fulltimejob,andrequireseffortstobemadeinandoutofschool.
OrganizationwasanotherdepartmentImadestridesin.Althoughthefirstfewdeadlinesdidn’tshowit,by
theendoftheyearIfeltIhadfinallyfiguredoutthesystemofwritingandsubmittingstories.Inmylasttwodead-
lines,mysportsstorieswerewellwritten(althoughverylate)becauseIhadgatheredalltheinterviewsandstatis-
ticsIneededbeforethefinaldeadline.
Mainly,Ilearnedthateverythingstartswithbeingproactive.Ifyoucangetyourinterviewsdonebeforepeer
edits,doit.Havingaheadstartwillbeimmenselyhelpfulifyoufallbehindlaterinthedeadline.Writingyourstory
whileyouhavetime,beforeit’sdue,makestherestofthedeadlineslessaboutwriting,andmoreabouttweaking.
Gettinganearlystartcanalsohelpforadsales,asIlearnedthehardwaythisyear.IwaiteduntilAugustto
startsellingads,andbythen,mystreethadvirtuallybeenbleddryofmoney.Beatingthecrosscountryteamand
yearbookisoneofthebestadvantagesyoucangiveyourself,andnottakingthatadvantageisbeingveryunwise.
Overall,thisyearwaslessaboutlearningnewthings,andmoreabouttweakingwhatIalreadyknow.Hope-
fully,nextyearwillbetheyearIcanperformatmaximumcapacity,withoutmissingdeadline.
MyrestaurantreviewofBananaswaswithoutadoubtmymostsignificantpieceofworkthisyear.Itwas
wellwritten,descriptive,andhadalogicalflowofideas.ItalsoreceivedanFSPAAllFloridaawardforNewspaper
Reviews2011.
MypurposeforwritingwastogiveadetailedandthoroughopinionaboutBananas.Ithinkwentabove
andbeyondinthedescriptivesense.ItwasnotasdifficultasIanticipated,tryingtopiecetogetherallmythoughts
aboutBananas,asIdiscoveredalogicalordertoarrangethemin.Thehardestpartwastryingtofindspaceinthe
storyforallthebananapunsIcameupwith.Thetitle,“Newrestaurantgainsappeal,”wasthesinglegreatestpun-
headlineIhaveeverconceived.Iwassoproudofthisstory,andtogiveitsuchagreatheadlineseemedonlyfitting.
Thestorycamealongwayfromthefirstdraft.Myfirstdraftfilledonlyoneofthethreecolumnsprovided,and
didn’tgivethereaderanysortofideaabouttherestaurant.Bythethirddeadline,IhadmoreofanideaofhowIwas
goingtoorganizethepiece.Metaphorsandcreativesimileswerescatteredevenlythroughoutthereview,Itried
todescribeeachdishinasmuchdetail,ascreativelyaspossible,andIthinkIdidasatisfactoryjobofhelpingthe
readervisualizethefood.“Thisharmoniousblendofsavoryeggsandfreshavocadocreatesasymphonyofflavor
andtextureinone’smouth.”
WhatIenjoyedmostaboutwritingthisstorywasrealizingaftergoingtofinalthatIhadn’tratedtheres-
taurant.Itookacopyofmyreview,readitover,andIcouldn’tfindanysortofnegativecommentsabouttherestau-
rant.Iwassohappytogivetherestaurantfivestars,becausetheyhadreallyearnedit,anditfeltgoodtowritesuch
anappraisingreview.
Outofbothmyyearsonstaffthishasbecomemymostsignificantpiece,andtheonlypiecetoberecog-
nizedbytheFSPAinmyname.
Mysportsfeatureontheboy’sandgirl’sgolfteamwasmyleastfavoritestorythisyear.Iwasnothappy
withthefinalproduct,itwasnotfactuallysound,anditwaschoppy.Iwouldmakeseveraladjustmentstothestory
ifgivenachancetoredoit.
Idon’tenjoyreadingthestory,andIdoubtanyonedoes.Thequotesaren’talwaysrelevanttotheinforma-
tioninthepreviousparagraph,allofthestatisticsareincorrect,anditdoesn’treadsmoothly.Thatbeingsaid,I
learnedalotfromwritingthispiece.Ilearnedthatyoushouldalwaysdouble,oreventriplecheckyourstatistics
online(ifavailable),orwiththecoaches.Ilearnedthatyoushouldonlyinterviewathletesrelevanttotheinformation
presentedinthestory,notjustbecausethey’regood.Finally,Ilearnedthatifyoudon’tmaketheefforttogooutto
theactualgame,match,etc,you’llhaveamuchtoughertimewritingaboutwhathappened,becauseyouweren’t
there.
Thisstorywentthroughalotofdesignchanges,sothefirstdraftwasasinglecolumn,facts-onlydescrip-
tionoftheseason.Iteventuallyevolvedintoathreecolumn,quotefilleddisaster.TheplayersIinterviewedweren’t
veryinformed,soalmostallofmystatisticsanddateswerewrong.Lookingback,Iwouldhavedonethisdifferently
byreconfirmingalldatesandstatswiththecoach.
Mymainproblemwiththisstoryisthatitdidn’treadwell.Itseemedtojumparoundfromadatetoaquote,
andthenfromastatistictoanotherquotewithoutanysenseoffloworlogicalorder.Ifgiventhechancetochange
this,Iwouldhaveaddedmoreinformationonthegirl’steam,andwouldhavetriedtomakeamoregracefultransi-
tionbetweenthetwoteams.
I’mnotveryhappywithhowIdidonthegolfstory.I(andothers)foundmanyerrorsplaguingtheentire
piece,anditdoesn’tsoundlikesomethingIwouldwrite.Iamgratefulforthelessonsittaughtmethough,because
ithelpedmeavoidtheseproblemsinthefuture.
Iamveryproudofthispicture.
ItwasprintedintheOctoberissueinthe
sportssection,forthegolfstory.Ithasa
goodcenterofvisualinterest,whichisthe
golferhimself,andithasagoodflowtoit.
BythatImean,theeyesfollowtheclub
totheflyingchunksofgrass,andendup
attheball.Thephotoiscrystalclear,and
hasanicebackground.Itfillstheframe
completely,andI’mattractedtothisshot
becauseofthewayitcapturesthegolfer
justafterhisdrive.
Asamemberofthe2011Hi-Lightsstaff,Ihaveshownmycommitmentanddedicationtothestaffnumer-
oustimesandinnumerousways.Ihaverepresentedthestaffinclubevents,helpedraisefundsandwasaproduc-
tivewriter.
Throughoutthecourseoftheyear,Iparticipatedinseveraleventsundertheflagofthe2011Hi-Lights
staff.TheseincludetheReservationRun,GreenUpBoone,andRelayforLife.Ineachevent,thetimeIspentand
moneyIraisedwasrecordedundertheHi-Lightsstaff,notonlyhelpingtheeventcause,butalsoshowingthatthe
Hi-Lightsstaffhadadedicatedworkforce.Iraised20dollarsfortheReservationRun,raised100dollarsforand
spent14hoursattheRelayforLife,andIworkedforthreehoursatGreenUpBoone.Timeandtimeagain,Imade
surethattheHi-Lightsstaffwasrepresentedatmultipleschoolfunctions.
Ialsotookthetimetohelpraisefundsforstaffthroughouttheyear.Inthesummerbeforeschool,Itook4
hourshiftstopanhandleoutsideofPublixtoraisemoneyforcamp,althoughmyfeehadalreadybeenpaid.When
candysalesstarted,notonlydidIselltwoboxesforstaff,butIsoldmore150dollarsworthofotherstafferscandy,
totalingatover200dollarstowardsstaff.Duringtherummagesale,Iworkedbothshifts,eventhoughonlyonewas
required.Istayeduntiltheendofthedaytocleanuptheleftoversaswell.Attheendoftheyear,Iwas32dollars
overwhatwasaskedofme.
Asaoneyearveteranonstaff,Iwasanassettotheactualproductionofthepaperinmanyways.Iprovided
goodstories,althoughnotalwaysontime,Iwasrarelymarkedoffforcontent.Althoughmytimingcouldhavebeen
improved,thepiecesIcontributedwerewellwritten,andhadalogicalflowofideas.Iwasalsoahelpinghandwhen
itcametonewbiesindistress.Myexperienceonstaffprovidedusefulinformationandhelpednewbieslearntobe
selfsufficientonceItaughtthemaprocess.
Ireceivedalotmorethantherecommendeddoseofhardshipsandproblemsthispastyear.Timeandtime
againIwasplaguedbyprocrastination,disorganization,anddistractions.
Althoughwinningthe“BiggestProcrastinator”awardatthePublicationsbanquetshouldhavesentaclear
messagethatIneededtosetasidetimeformywork,Istillhadtroublemakingdeadline.Imadedeadlineonlytwice
thispastyear,andIwasaiming(realistically)forfour.PeereditsviaGoogleDocs,althoughintendedtosavepaper
andtime,endedupgivingmeanotherexcusenottobeontime.Therewasamuchmorediresenseofurgencywhen
fourhardcopiesofyourpeereditshadtobebroughttoclassforeverydeadline.IhavenowlearnedthatIwillsimply
havetowritethestorybeforeitisduetobesuccessfulonstaff.
Iwasalsoverydisorganizedthisyear,anotherproblemIhadhopedtohavesolvedbynow.Mystory-writing
processwasnotasefficientasIwouldhavelikedtohaveit,withinterviewsstillbeingdonebythetimethestory
wasduetotheCopyeditor.Nextyear,Iwillattempttodothingsinamuchmorelogicalorder,andearlyifpossible.
MygoalfornextyearistofinalstoriesearlysoIcanhelpourveryyoungstaffonit’swaytomeetingdeadline.
Afamiliarproblemfromlastyeargainedanewfacethisyear.Ibecameeasilydistractedduringworkdays
whenIwasaroundmyco-worker,peer,andbestfriendThomasEgan.Webothbecameawareofthisdilemmaearly
intheyear,wheneveryoneyelledatusaboutit.AsmuchasItriedtoremainfocusedonmywork,wewouldalways
findawaytodistracteachother,andI’mnotproudofthat.EvenwhenImadetheextraefforttomeetdeadlinein
themayissue,andsucceededinmyfirststory,Ipreventedthepaperfromgoingtopressontimebecauseofmy
secondstory.Fromanotheryearofmissingdeadlines,Ilearnedthatheadphonescanbeyourbestfriend.
Ihavemadeprogress,butIstilldidn’tperformasIwantedtothisyear,amistakeIdon’tplanonmaking
athirdtime.Asthestafflosesit’sseasonedseniors,Iunderstandthatthereisavoidofleadership,andthoseable
willhavetostepuptothechallenge.Withtwoyearsofexperienceundermybelt,andmultiplelessonslearned,my
responsecanbedescribedbythephrase,“Challengeaccepted.”
Inthenewspapermidterm,Iwasaskedwhatmygreatestweaknessis,relatedtopublications.Ianswered
“maintainingfocus.”Inthetimesincethen,notonlyhavemyworkhabitsimproved,butIhavestayedfocusedin
classtogreaterextentthanseeninthepast.
Duringtheworkdaysfollowingthemidterm,Ispentthemajorityofmytimestaringacomputerscreen,
desperatelytryingtomakedeadline.IwastedaslittletimeasIcould,andaftershowingupandeating,Isatdown,
anddidmyworkasbestasIcould.Iamhappyaboutcuttingdowntimegoofingaroundinclass,butIwishIwould
havemademoreprogressinmeetingdeadlines.
Ionlymetonedeadlineafterthemidterm,butIfeellikeIputamuchmorefocusedeffortintoallmysto-
ries.Thecontentwasbetter,andthestoriesreadwell.Whenmystoriesweregraded,theyweremainlymarkedoff
forbeinglate,notforbeingbadstories.Ifeltmyvoiceasawriterreallydefineditselfthisyear,andnowmywritingis
recognizableasmywork.
Iamdisappointedinthefactthatonlyonedeadlinewasmadeafterthehalfwaymark.IfeelIputasignifi-
cantlybettereffortintothatportionoftheyear,butlookingback,therewasstillroomtogoup.IunderstandthatI
wasn’tfocused100%ofthetime,butIstillfeelIputinabettereffortthanbefore,andsincerelyfeelIhaveim-
provedsinceAugust.
IdidnotimproveasmuchasIwouldhavelikedto,butimprovementsweremade.Thequalityofworkwent
up,theeffortputintotheworkwentup,andthetimespentgoofingaroundwentdown.Lookingtonextyear,Ihope
tokeepworkingonthisweaknessuntilIcaneffectivelybealeaderonstaff.
"The Force is what gives a Jedi his power. It's an ener-gy field created by all living things. It surrounds us and penetrates us. It binds the galaxy together." - Obi-wan Kenobi
Finishingupmysecondyearonstaff,itisonlynowthatIseehowmuchIhavegrown.Lookingbackinmy
previousportfolio,IseethatIhavemadeadvancesinmywritingability,designandoverallqualityofwork.
Beinganewbieonstaff,Ihadnothadthechancetofinetunemywriting,somystoriesandreflections
weresub-paratbest.Thisyear,myvoiceasawriterbegantoemerge,andInoticedIhaddevelopedacertainstyle
ofwritingbythelastissue.Ihadbecomecomfortableenoughwithmywritingabilitytostartattemptingtoinclude
creativitythroughoutmystories.Punsandheadlinesquicklybecamemyfavoriteaspectofwriting,becauseIcould
drawattentiontomystorywithacleverleadin.MyrestaurantreviewofBananasquicklybecamemymostaccom-
plishedwork,asIturneditinontime,anditwasactuallyaverygoodstory.
Mydesigningabilityhasalsogrownsincelastyear,withamoresophisticatedandmodernportfoliodesign,
andtwospreadsexhibitingmygrowth.Iwasabletotakeamoreactiveroleindesigningmypagesduringtheyearas
well,asshowninbothmygolfandwaterpolofeature.Mytrackstoryhadmymostinterestingsecondarycoverage,
andIenjoyedthelayoutofthestory,whichallowedforalargedominantgraphic.
Asanoverallstaffer,IfeelImadethemostprogress,jumpingfromnodeadlinesmet,totwodeadlinesmet.
Notveryimpressive,butthejoythatcamewithmeetingthefirstone,inspiredmetocontinuetofocusandwork
hardfortherestoftheyear.Iamcompletelyhappywiththefinalversionofallbutoneofmystories,andIfeellikeI
coveredthesubjectsthoroughly.
Myportfoliodesignisn’tmorecomplicated,butIthinkithasabetterstyleandlooktoit.Iamveryhappy
withhowitturnedout,andIlookforwardtoexceedingitagainnextyear.