CONTENTS DRAFTS AND FEEDBACK

Cameron Tubb

Draft 1

Feedback

To much plain space Not enough writing Not enough colours No set layout

Draft 2

Feedback

All you have done is change the colour

To much plain space Not enough writing Not enough colours No set layout

final

Feedback

Still way to much plain space If I was you I would restart from the

beginning Poor colours No picture which is visible

NEW CONTENTS

I'm completely changing my contents page to make it simpler to read and so it looks more professional.

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This is my final contents page and I'm very pleased with the result as it looks professional and 100% better than my previous attempts.