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? Difficulty is encountered in explanation of the

method to inexperienced engineers owing to

its computational complexity.

: Explaining the method toinexperienced engineers is difficult owing

to its computational complexity.

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? Simulation of the program is performed in this

study.

: This study simulates the program.

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? A slight increase occurs in the deposition rate.

: The deposition rate slightlyincreases.

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? Knowledge of how the variables are

distributed is not required by novice

engineers .

: Novice engineers do not need toknow how the variables are distributed.

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? Not only is the variability of the control factors

considered by the proposed procedure, but

implementation of related tasks is performedby that same procedure.

: In addition to considering thevariability of the control factors, the

proposed procedure implements related

tasks.

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? A recommendation of using iterative least

squares (ILS) as a simple method for analysis

of censored data was made by Schmee andHahn (1990).

: Schmee and Hahn (1990)recommended using iterative least squares

(ILS) as a simple method for analyzing

censored data.

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? Normalization of operations is achieved by a

simple calculation of the scores.

: Simply calculating the scoresnormalizes operations.

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? Improvement of the condition is achieved by

variation of the control factors .

: Varying the control factors improvesthe condition.

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? A recommendation is made here that the

program be simulated by the engineer.

: We recommend that the engineersimulate the program.

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? The operator made a reservation of the ticket

for me.

:The operator reserved the ticket forme.

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