COMPOSITION MISTAKES 6

INTERMEDIATE LEVEL SECOND YEAR

Dear sir Adams Dear Mr. Adams

I think you´ll be agree with me I think you will agree with me

near to the hotel there was near the hotel there was

They said us if we want to left the hotel we …

They said to us if we wanted to leave the hotel we…

We spent much time looking for the hotel

We spent a lot of time looking for the hotel

I am writing to complaint about a book I had made the last Christmasat one of their hotel in….

I am writing to complain about a boking I had made last Christmas in one of your hotels…

We only saw the parking We only saw the car park

I had hired a five stars hotel I had hired a five star hotel

We found the bed not prepared We found the bed was not made

In the floor we found… On the floor we found…

The room was so dirty

The room was very dirtyThe room was so dirty that we decided to make a complaint

You have to resolve this problem You have to solve this problem

I had reserved a five stars hotel I had booked a five star hotel

The staff was so impolite

The staff was extremely impoliteThe staff was so impolite that we moved to another hotel

Despite your website had shown…

In spite of the fact that your website had shown…

The trip we did to Canarias The trip we made to the Canary islands

I had the worst holidays in my life I had the worst holidays of my life

The restaurant´s plates The plates of the restaurant

My towels and sheets was dirty My towels and sheets were dirty

We asked for all this things We asked for all these things

But what was our surprise to found But to our surprise we found

One for children and other for the adults

One for children and another for adults

The treatmemt the reception staff were wrong

The treatment we were given by the reception staff was very unsatisfactory

Nothing was like that I had seen Nothing was like what I had seen

They show me the hotel and I was agree

They showed me the hotel and I agreed

In spite of the hotel wasn´t full

In spite of the fact that the hotel was not full. In spite of not being fullIn the ground floor On the ground floor