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Common Core LearningCommon Core LearningStandards MillionaireStandards Millionaire
A Dutchess BOCES
Production
A: B:
Cheese Croissant
with Light Sugar
Common Core
Learning Standards
#1What does the acronym CCLS stand for?
C: D:
Curriculum Can Limit Students
Common Core
Literacy Standards
A: B:Knowledge of language
Presentation of
Knowledge and Ideas
#2Which of the following is NOT a strand?
C: D:
Developing and Strengthening
Writing
Research to Present and
Build Knowledge
A: B:
Known Grade
Average
National Governor’s
Agenda
#3What does NGA stand for?
C: D:
National Governor’s Association
No Girls Allowed
A: B:Nebraska Michigan
#4Which of the following states is
NOT part of the CCSS?
C: D:
MexicoWest Virginia
A: B:
Opinion, Non-Fiction
and Narrative
Information, Narrative
and Argument
#5The CCSS asks students to do 3 types of
writing text types. Specifically, what are they?
C: D:
Biography, recipes and
How-To Manuals
Argument, Information
and Memoir
A: B:
Career and College
Readiness
Credence Clearwater
Revival
#6What is CCR stand for?
C: D:
College and Career
Rankings
College and Career
Readiness
A: B:48 44
#7How many CCR’s are there in the CCLS?
C: D:
Not enough32
A: B:CCSSO CCSO
#8Which of the following acronym is
used in the CCLS document?
C: D:LMAOCSS
A: B:APPENDIX
A
APPENDIX B
#9In which appendix would I find
annotated writing samples?
C: D:
All of them have writing
stupid!
APPENDIX C
A: B:Standard 3 CCR 6
#10Which standard means “Do it at grade level?”
C: D:
The last one in each strand
Standard 10
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New York State Assessment Transition PlanELA & Math
Revised October 20, 2011
1 New ELA assessments in grades 9 and 10 will begin during the 2012-13 school year and will be aligned to the Common Core, pending funding.
2 The PARCC assessments are scheduled to be operational in 2014-15 and are subject to adoption by the New York State Board of Regents. The PARCC assessments are still in development and the role of PARCC assessments as Regents assessments will be determined. All PARCC assessments will be aligned to the Common Core.
3 The names of New York State’s Mathematics Regents exams are expected to change to reflect the new alignment of these assessments to the Common Core. For additional information about the upper-level mathematics course sequence and related standards, see the “Traditional Pathway” section of Common Core Mathematics Appendix A.
4 The timeline for Regents Math roll-out is under discussion.
5 New York State is a member of the NCSC national alternate assessments consortium that is engaged in research and development of new alternate assessments for alternate achievement standards. The NCSC assessments are scheduled to be operational in 2014-15 and are subject to adoption by the New York State Board of Regents.
Assessment – Grade / Subject
2011-12 2012-13 2013-14 2014-15
ELA
Grades 3-8 Aligned to 2005 Standards
Grade 91
Grade 101
Aligned to the Common Core
Grade 11 Regents
Aligned to 2005 Standards
PARCC2
Math
Grades 3-8 Aligned to 2005 Standards Aligned to the Common Core
Algebra I3 Aligned to 2005 Standards Aligned to the Common Core
Geometry3 Aligned to 2005 Standards Aligned to the Common Core4
Algebra II3 Aligned to 2005 Standards
PARCC2
Additional State Assessments
NYSAA Aligned to the Common Core NCSC5
NYSESLAT Aligned to 2005 Standards Aligned to the Common Core
DRAFT
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Common Core: Alignment of the Science & Social Studies Assessments
As of October 20, 2011 (Subject to Revision)Assessment – Grade / Subject
2011-12 2012-13 2013-14 2014-15
Science
Grades 4 & 84 Aligned to 1996 Standards
Grades 4 & 6-84 Aligned to Next Generation Science Standards with Common Core Infusion
Earth Science4 Aligned to 1996 Standards
Aligned to Next Generation Science Standards with Common Core Infusion Living
Environment4
Chemistry4 Aligned to 1996 Standards
Aligned to Next Generation Science Standards with Common Core Infusion Physics4
Social Studies
Grades 6-84 Aligned to 1996 Standards with Common Core Infusion
Global Hist. & Geo.5
Aligned to 1996 Standards Aligned to 1996 Standards with Common Core Infusion
U.S. Hist. & Gov’t.
Aligned to 1996 Standards Aligned to 1996 Standards with Common Core Infusion
4 In conjunction with New York State’s Race to the Top award, there will be new Science assessments in grades 6 and 7 and new Social Studies assessments in grades 6-8. These assessments are expected to include the Common Core Literacy Standards and will be infused with Common Core expectations (e.g., reliance on enduring understandings rather than non-core factual knowledge) to reflect New York State’s adoption of the Common Core. The state-level and national dialogues about learning standards are ever-changing, and should the New York State Board of Regents choose to adopt new learning standards such as the Next Generation Science Standards currently under development by a multi-state consortium of which New York is a lead state, these new assessments will be aligned to new learning standards.
The graphic represents that there will also be a new Gr 8 assessment…
6Pending acceptance and approval of Next Generation Science Standards by Board of Regents. New York State is participating in development of the NGSS.
DRAFT
Unpacking Standards
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
STANDARD: RCCR1Read closely to determine what the text says
explicitly and to make logical inferences from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to
support conclusions drawn from text.
• CONCEPTS (nouns) what the students should know.
• SKILLS (verbs) what the students should be able to do.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
STANDARD: RCCR1Read closely to determine what the text says
explicitly and to make logical inferences from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to
support conclusions drawn from text.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
STANDARD: RCCR1Read closely to determine what the text says
explicitly and to make logical inferences from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to
support conclusions drawn from text.
CONCEPTS (nouns) what the students should know.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
STANDARD: RCCR1Read closely to determine what the text says
explicitly and to make logical inferences from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to support conclusions drawn from text.
CONCEPTS (nouns) what the students should know.
Inferences, conclusion, textual evidence
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
• STANDARD:Read closely to determine what the text says
explicitly and to make logical inferences from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to
support conclusions drawn from text.
• CONCEPTS (nouns) what the students should know.
Inferences, conclusion, textual evidence
• SKILLS (verbs) what the students should be able to do.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
STANDARD: RCCR1Read closely to determine what the text says
explicitly and to make logical inferences from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to support conclusions drawn from text.
• CONCEPTS (nouns) what the students should know.
Inferences, conclusion, textual evidence• SKILLS (verbs) what the students should be able to do.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
STANDARD: RCCR1Read closely to determine what the text says
explicitly and to make logical inferences from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to support conclusions drawn from text.
• CONCEPTS (nouns) what the students should know.
Inferences, conclusion, textual evidence• SKILLS (verbs) what the students should be able to do.
Read closely, make logical inferences, cite specific textual evidence, support
conclusions
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
Provides the information ready for the next step.Can be:1. determining adjectives
2. Determining big ideas, then,
3. Determining essential questions.
NOUNS VERBS ADJECTIVES
specific
We’ve gone interactive!
• If you were going to teach this text tomorrow, how would you teach it?
• How long would it take to teach this text effectively?• What are the stages students would need to go through to
engage with this text deeply?• What questions should be asked and in which order?• What is a task we could ask students to answer at the end
to determine whether they have conducted a close reading of this text?
INFORMATIONAL TEXT AND TASKS
APPENDIX B- COMMON CORE LEARNING STANDARDS
We’ve gone interactive!
SPEED STANDARDS
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
3. Narrative Writing
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
3. Narrative Writing
4. Produce clear writing that answers the task
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
3. Narrative Writing
4. Produce clear writing that answers the task
5. Do the writing process
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
3. Narrative Writing
4. Produce clear writing that answers the task
5. Do the writing process
6. Use technology
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
3. Narrative Writing
4. Produce clear writing that answers the task
5. Do the writing process
6. Use technology
7. Conduct short research projects with focused questions
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
3. Narrative Writing
4. Produce clear writing that answers the task
5. Do the writing process
6. Use technology
7. Conduct short research projects with focused questions
8. Gather information from lots of sources
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
3. Narrative Writing
4. Produce clear writing that answers the task
5. Do the writing process
6. Use technology
7. Conduct short research projects with focused questions
8. Gather information from lots of sources
9. Draw evidence from the sources
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
3. Narrative Writing
4. Produce clear writing that answers the task
5. Do the writing process
6. Use technology
7. Conduct short research projects with focused questions
8. Gather information from lots of sources
9. Draw evidence from the sources
10. Write lots/ write often/ write varied
WRITING STANDARDS MADE SIMPLE1. Opinion/Argument Writing
2. Informative/Expository Writing
3. Narrative Writing
4. Produce clear writing that answers the task
5. Do the writing process
6. Use technology
7. Conduct short research projects with focused questions
8. Gather information from lots of sources
9. Draw evidence from the sources
10. Write lots/ write often/ write varied
11. Make connections when you write
We’ve gone interactive!
Identifying and
Teaching Data Points
Discussion and Description…
before Analysis…
before Planning.
Discussion and Description
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
STANDARD: W4.2Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and
convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in
paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases (e.g., another, for example, also, because).
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation presented.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
STANDARD: W4.2Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic
and convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in
paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases (e.g., another, for example, also, because).
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation presented.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS
STANDARD: W4.2Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic
and convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in
paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases (e.g., another, for example, also, because).
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation presented.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS STANDARD: W4.2Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and
convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in paragraphs and sections;
include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases (e.g., another, for example, also, because).
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation presented.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS STANDARD: W4.2Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and
convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in paragraphs and sections;
include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases (e.g., another, for example, also, because).
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation presented.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS STANDARD: W4.2Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and
convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in paragraphs and sections;
include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases (e.g., another, for example, also, because).
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation presented.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS STANDARD: W4.2Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and
convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in paragraphs and sections;
include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases (e.g., another, for example, also, because).
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation presented.
UNPACKING LEARNING STANDARDS STANDARD: W4.2Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and
convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in paragraphs and sections;
include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases (e.g., another, for example, also, because).
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation presented.
Introduce a topic clearly
group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Analysis
Introduce a topic clearly
group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
TASK DESCRIPTION: Students write an essay using key details from the text to explain why John Muir devoted his life to conservation efforts and describe the effect that his work had on preserving the beauty of nature.
“John Muir” Can you believe what one man could do? I read the articel “John Muir theConservationist on the Quarter” by Liana Mahoney. In the article I learned about a man named John Muir. John Muir was born on April 21, 1838. He was a man who loved nature the way it was. He walked more than a thousand miles across the country, through fields and woods admiring nature. John Muir devoted his life to conservation and also to preserving of beauty of nature.
John Muir wrote about the problems too. He wrote that people were cutting down the trees for more farmland. He also wrote places he visited describing their beauty. Soon people started to listen. For example Theodore Roosevelt the president of the united States of America, was convinced that was a need to protect our land.
John Muir hard work paid off. After the visit from the president. president Roosevelt set aside 148 million acres of land for national forest and established five national parks. A law was also passed that says that people cannot build homes or businesses. Thanks to him we can enjoy the parks and all it’s natural beauty.
John Muir worked long and hard every day to keep things in nature just the way they are. Today people continued his work.
Introduce a topic clearly
group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
“John Muir” Can you believe what one man could do? I read the articel “John Muir theConservationist on the Quarter” by Liana Mahoney. In the article I learned about a man named John Muir. John Muir was born on April 21, 1838. He was a man who loved nature the way it was. He walked more than a thousand miles across the country, through fields and woods admiring nature. John Muir devoted his life to conservation and also to preserving of beauty of nature.
John Muir wrote about the problems too. He wrote that people were cutting down the trees for more farmland. He also wrote places he visited describing their beauty. Soon people started to listen. For example Theodore Roosevelt the president of the united States of America, was convinced that was a need to protect our land.
John Muir hard work paid off. After the visit from the president. president Roosevelt set aside 148 million acres of land for national forest and established five national parks. A law was also passed that says that people cannot build homes or businesses. Thanks to him we can enjoy the parks and all it’s natural beauty.
John Muir worked long and hard every day to keep things in nature just the way they are. Today people continued his work.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
“John Muir” Can you believe what one man could do? I read the articel “John Muir theConservationist on the Quarter” by Liana Mahoney. In the article I learned about a man named John Muir. John Muir was born on April 21, 1838. He was a man who loved nature the way it was. He walked more than a thousand miles across the country, through fields and woods admiring nature. John Muir devoted his life to conservation and also to preserving of beauty of nature.
John Muir wrote about the problems too. He wrote that people were cutting down the trees for more farmland. He also wrote places he visited describing their beauty. Soon people started to listen. For example Theodore Roosevelt the president of the united States of America, was convinced that was a need to protect our land.
John Muir hard work paid off. After the visit from the president. president Roosevelt set aside 148 million acres of land for national forest and established five national parks. A law was also passed that says that people cannot build homes or businesses. Thanks to him we can enjoy the parks and all it’s natural beauty.
John Muir worked long and hard every day to keep things in nature just the way they are. Today people continued his work.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3 2
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3 2
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3 2
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
“John Muir” Can you believe what one man could do? I read the articel “John Muir theConservationist on the Quarter” by Liana Mahoney. In the article I learned about a man named John Muir. John Muir was born on April 21, 1838. He was a man who loved nature the way it was. He walked more than a thousand miles across the country, through fields and woods admiring nature. John Muir devoted his life to conservation and also to preserving of beauty of nature.
John Muir wrote about the problems too. He wrote that people were cutting down the trees for more farmland. He also wrote places he visited describing their beauty. Soon people started to listen. For example Theodore Roosevelt the president of the united States of America, was convinced that was a need to protect our land.
John Muir hard work paid off. After the visit from the president. president Roosevelt set aside 148 million acres of land for national forest and established five national parks. A law was also passed that says that people cannot build homes or businesses. Thanks to him we can enjoy the parks and all it’s natural beauty.
John Muir worked long and hard every day to keep things in nature just the way they are. Today people continued his work.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3 2 3
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3 2 3
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3 2 3
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
“John Muir” Can you believe what one man could do? I read the articel “John Muir theConservationist on the Quarter” by Liana Mahoney. In the article I learned about a man named John Muir. John Muir was born on April 21, 1838. He was a man who loved nature the way it was. He walked more than a thousand miles across the country, through fields and woods admiring nature. John Muir devoted his life to conservation and also to preserving of beauty of nature.
John Muir wrote about the problems too. He wrote that people were cutting down the trees for more farmland. He also wrote places he visited describing their beauty. Soon people started to listen. For example Theodore Roosevelt the president of the united States of America, was convinced that was a need to protect our land.
John Muir hard work paid off. After the visit from the president. president Roosevelt set aside 148 million acres of land for national forest and established five national parks. A law was also passed that says that people cannot build homes or businesses. Thanks to him we can enjoy the parks and all it’s natural beauty.
John Muir worked long and hard every day to keep things in nature just the way they are. Today people continued his work.
“John Muir” Can you believe what one man could do? I read the articel “John Muir theConservationist on the Quarter” by Liana Mahoney. In the article I learned about a man named John Muir. John Muir was born on April 21, 1838. He was a man who loved nature the way it was. He walked more than a thousand miles across the country, through fields and woods admiring nature. John Muir devoted his life to conservation and also to preserving of beauty of nature.
John Muir wrote about the problems too. He wrote that people were cutting down the trees for more farmland. He also wrote places he visited describing their beauty. Soon people started to listen. For example Theodore Roosevelt the president of the united States of America, was convinced that was a need to protect our land.
John Muir hard work paid off. After the visit from the president. president Roosevelt set aside 148 million acres of land for national forest and established five national parks. A law was also passed that says that people cannot build homes or businesses. Thanks to him we can enjoy the parks and all it’s natural beauty.
John Muir worked long and hard every day to keep things in nature just the way they are. Today people continued his work.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
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W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
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4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
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4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
“John Muir” Can you believe what one man could do? I read the articel “John Muir theConservationist on the Quarter” by Liana Mahoney. In the article I learned about a man named John Muir. John Muir was born on April 21, 1838. He was a man who loved nature the way it was. He walked more than a thousand miles across the country, through fields and woods admiring nature. John Muir devoted his life to conservation and also to preserving of beauty of nature.
John Muir wrote about the problems too. He wrote that people were cutting down the trees for more farmland. He also wrote places he visited describing their beauty. Soon people started to listen. For example Theodore Roosevelt the president of the united States of America, was convinced that was a need to protect our land.
John Muir hard work paid off. After the visit from the president. president Roosevelt set aside 148 million acres of land for national forest and established five national parks. A law was also passed that says that people cannot build homes or businesses. Thanks to him we can enjoy the parks and all it’s natural beauty.
John Muir worked long and hard every day to keep things in nature just the way they are. Today people continued his work.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
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4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3 2 3 3 3
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
3 2 3 3 3
4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
“John Muir” Can you believe what one man could do? I read the articel “John Muir theConservationist on the Quarter” by Liana Mahoney. In the article I learned about a man named John Muir. John Muir was born on April 21, 1838. He was a man who loved nature the way it was. He walked more than a thousand miles across the country, through fields and woods admiring nature. John Muir devoted his life to conservation and also to preserving of beauty of nature.
John Muir wrote about the problems too. He wrote that people were cutting down the trees for more farmland. He also wrote places he visited describing their beauty. Soon people started to listen. For example Theodore Roosevelt the president of the united States of America, was convinced that was a need to protect our land.
John Muir hard work paid off. After the visit from the president. president Roosevelt set aside 148 million acres of land for national forest and established five national parks. A law was also passed that says that people cannot build homes or businesses. Thanks to him we can enjoy the parks and all it’s natural beauty.
John Muir worked long and hard every day to keep things in nature just the way they are. Today people continued his work.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
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4- Completely 3- Mostly 2- Partially 1- not evident
W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
DISCUSSION AND DESCRIPTION1. Write the standard.2. Unpack the standard into data points.3. What does each mean?4.Identify what evidence they would find at each data point.
BEFORE ANALYSIS5. Read, and analyze, what you find within the data points.6. Reach consensus at your table for each data point rating. 7. Read out the data points to facilitator who will enter the data and create a date point sheet on the projector with graphs.
Graphing the results for analysis…
DISCUSSION AND DESCRIPTION1. Write the standard.2. Unpack the standard into data points.3. What does each mean?4.Identify what evidence they would find at each data point.
BEFORE ANALYSIS5. Read, and analyze, what you find within the data points.6. Reach consensus at your table for each data point rating. 7.Read out the data points to facilitator who will enter the data and create a date point sheet on the projector with graphs.
BEFORE PLANNING 8. Identifying the lessons that students need to be taught to show mastery with the standard.9. Discuss the importance of this with the plan of developing CCLS tasks and how this data will be useful to measure growth.
Introduce a topic clearly
Group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia
Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
Link ideas within categories of information using words and phrases
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain
Provide a concluding statement or section related to the information or explanation
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W4.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
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