Chapter 5: Summary and ParaphraseClassroom Activity

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Miguel & TAs

(Amy & Evan)

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There are three factors relevant to technology for making plastic surgery more

and more popular: safer operation, faster recovery and less expense.

Three factors relevant to technology—safer operations, faster recovery

and less expenses—are making plastic surgery more and more popular.

There are three identical internet motivations of women that trigger them to

plastic surgery: enhancing social ability, feeling more attractive, and loving

themselves better.

There are three identified internal motivations that are triggering women

to do plastic surgery: the hope for a better social life, the need to feel

more attractive, and the desire to appreciate themselves more.

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The Popularity

of Cosmetic Surgeries

For better

appearance

For better job

For better lifeFor higher

confidence

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The Popularity of Cosmetic Surgeries

For better

appearance

For better job

For better lifeFor higher

confidence

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General type

The Popularity

of Cosmetic Surgeries

Psychological factor:

lower confidence, insufficient sense of

security, vanity

External factor:

Competitive job market, influences of media

Physical factor:

Deficiencies, disadvantages

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Specific type

The Popularity of

Cosmetic Surgeries

External factor 1. Contemporary social changes (competiveness of

job market, higher acceptance)

External factor 3:

The promotions of cosmetic surgeries

(lower price/ advancements)

External factor 2:

Influences of media (ads/ celebrities)

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Review: Choose the better paraphrase

Read the original text

The problem of obedience is not wholly psychological. The

form and shape of society and the way it is developing have

much to do with it. There was a time, perhaps, when people

were able to give a fully human response to any situation

because they were fully absorbed in it as human beings. But

as soon as there was a division of labor things changed.

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Paraphrase 1

Milgram (1974) claims that people's willingness to obey

authority figures cannot be explained by psychological

factors alone. In an earlier era, people may have had the

ability to invest in social situations to a greater extent.

However, as society has become increasingly structured by a

division of labor, people have become more alienated from

situations over which they do not have control (p.737).

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Paraphrase 2

The issue involved in obedience is not entirely psychological.

The structure and ambience of society and the way it is

developing have much to do with it. There was a period,

perhaps, when people were able to give a perfectly human

response to any condition because they were totally

intrigued by it as human beings. But as soon as there were

duty assignments things changed.

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Review: Hands-on practice

Working in small groups, read the following sayings and

concentrate on what they mean.

Take a few minutes for each group member to write a

paraphrase of the original.

Don’t forget the suggested steps/tips for paraphrase

mentioned in the video.

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Try to paraphrase…

Don’t Judge each day by the

harvest you reap but by the

seeds that you plant

--Robert Louis Stevenson

“Success is stumbling from

failure to failure without loss of

enthusiasm.”

--Winston Churchill

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“We can do not great things,

only small things with great

love.”

--Mother Teresa

“Don’t cry over spilled

milk. By this time

tomorrow, it’ll be free

yogurt.”

--Stephen Colbert

Discussion

Read each person’s paraphrase aloud and discuss

each of the paraphrases using the following criteria:

It is close in meaning to the saying.

No new ideas are added.

Important ideas are not deleted.

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7 “The problem

of obedience is

not only…there

was a division

of labor things

changed”

Milgram, S. (1974). The perils of obedience. In L.G.

Kirszner & S.R. Mandell (Eds.) The Blair reader (p.

737). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice Hall.

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8 “Milgram (1974)

claims

that…people

have become

more alienated

from situations

over which they

do not have

control. ”

改寫自Milgram, S. (1974). The perils of obedience.

In L.G. Kirszner & S.R. Mandell (Eds.) The Blair

reader (p. 737). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice

Hall.

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9 “The issue

involved in

obedience ….

But as soon as

there were duty

assignments

things changed. ”

改寫自Milgram, S. (1974). The perils of obedience.

In L.G. Kirszner & S.R. Mandell (Eds.) The Blair

reader (p. 737). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice

Hall.

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11 “Don’t

Judge each

day by the

harvest you

reap but by

the seeds

that you

plant”

--Robert

Louis

Stevenson

Robert Louis Stevenson. (n.d.). BrainyQuote.com.

Retrieved February 1, 2015, from BrainyQuote.com

Web site:

http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/quotes/r/robertlo

ui101230.html

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11 “Success is

stumbling

from failure

to failure

without loss

of

enthusiasm.”

--Winston

Churchill

Winston Churchill. (n.d.). Retrieved February 1, 2015,

from

http://www.myenglishpages.com/site_php_files/readi

ng-quotes-about-success.php#.VM5DtGiUdqU

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11 “Don’t cry

over spilled

milk. By

this time

tomorrow,

it’ll be free

yogurt.”

--Stephen

Colbert

Stephen Colbert. (n.d.). Retrieved February 1, 2015,

from http://izquotes.com/quote/220524

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11 “We can do

not great

things, only

small things

with great

love.”

--Mother

Teresa

Top 10 Mother Teresa Quotes To Inspire You Today.

(n.d.). Retrieved February 1, 2015, from

http://www.patheos.com/blogs/christiancrier/2013/08/

29/top-10-mother-teresa-quotes-to-inspire-you-today/

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