Music Magazine Front Page

DraftsSarah Powney

Second Draft

Originally, I was going to create a music

magazine focusing on pop/chart music

including articles on clubbing music.

However, I felt that my model might

have looked too young to target that

audience therefore I will change the

clubbing references in the tag line and

cover lines for then next draft.

I need to make this cover line bigger so

it stands out more. I might also try to

move the text underneath to go across

the ‘artist’ to show that it is about her.

Although I like the colour scheme

red, black and white I would like to

change the repetitive pattern to make it

look more interesting. I may also

change the button to make it look more

appealing.

Third Draft

I have made the cover line bigger which

I think looks more effective. In

addition, I moved the text underneath

and rotated it across the ‘artist’ I like this

change and this it looks more effective.

I have temporarily removed the button,

however, there is now a gap so I will

try to fill this with

I have adjusted the repetitive pattern

however , I still am not completely

satisfied with the colour of the cover

lines and the text at the bottom. I will

continue to play around with the

colours.

I have changed the references to

clubbing music by changing the

competition and the tag line. This is

more appropriate for the audience that

the image would attract.

Fourth Draft

I have created a button using Photoshop

which gives the effect of a ‘peeled off

sticker’ I think this is effective and

attention-grabbing. However, I do not

like the grey writing because it does not

fit in with the theme.

Once again, I have adjusted the

repetitive pattern however , I still am

not completely content with the colour

of the cover lines and the text at the

bottom. This time I think I will go back

to the original colour pattern for the

cover lines and change the text in the

bottom corner to vary the theme.

Final Draft

This is the final draft of my front cover. I

have made a few minor changes

including the colour of the text at the

bottom and feel proud of the final

product.