bellringers 131-135
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Bellringers 131-135. Bellringers for all classes. Bellringer # 131. 1. Looking over my paper I saw that I had left some periods out. 2. Reviewing it further I also saw that I’d put some periods where they did not belong. Corrections: 1) add comma after paper 2) add comma after further. - PowerPoint PPT PresentationTRANSCRIPT
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Bellringer # 131• 1. Looking over my paper I saw that I
had left some periods out.• 2. Reviewing it further I also saw that
I’d put some periods where they did not belong.
• Corrections: 1) add comma after paper 2) add comma after further
Bellringer # 132• 1. I used too many exclamation points in the paper I
wrote by mistake.• 2. Looking over my work, the exclamation points were
clearly excessive.• 3. I erased the ones that were unnecessary on the bus.
• Corrections: 1) I used too many exclamation points by mistake in the paper I wrote. 2) Looking over my work, I saw that the exclamation points were clearly excessive. 3) On the bus, I erased the ones that were unnecessary.
Bellringer # 133• 1. My teacher asked me if I’d written a
war story?• 2. I wonder if one can write a war story
without experiencing war?• 3. Don’t writers have to experience
what they write about!
• Corrections: 1) period at end 2) period at end 3) question mark at end
Bellringer # 134• 1. To set the table, you will need the
following, plates, glasses, knives, forks, and spoons.
• 2. At about 7, 15 p.m., we will eat a meal that includes: chicken, potatoes, salad, corn, and pie.
• Corrections: 1) following: 2) 7:15 p.m., and nothing after includes
Bellringer # 135• 1. As a young boy, Booker T. Washington
went to school, however, he went only to carry books for the plantation owner’s daughter.
• 2. He went only as far as the door, he wasn’t allowed to go inside.
• Corrections: 1) school; however, 2) door;