BELL RINGER 12/8Each of the following sentences needs either a comma or a semicolon. Put in

the necessary punctuation.COPY THE SENTENCE!

1. Many companies make sugar-free soft drinks, which are flavored by synthetic chemicals the drinks usually contain only one or two calories per serving.

2. Mr. Leyland played the viola professionally for many years and he now conducts a community orchestra.

3. The crab grass was flourishing but the rest of the lawn, unfortunately, was dying.

Time is Up!

ANSWERS

• 1. Many companies make sugar-free soft drinks, which are flavored by synthetic chemicals; the drinks usually contain only one or two calories per serving.

• 2. Mr. Leyland played the viola professionally for many years, and he now conducts a community orchestra.

• 3. The crab grass was flourishing, but the rest of the lawn, unfortunately, was dying.

HOMEWORK REVIEWWHAT WAS REQUIRED?-INTRODUCTION- H.O.T-2 BODY PARAGRAPHS-M.E.L.TWHAT GOES INTO A

CONCLUSION?-RESTATE THESIS- Why you are

the best you to go to their school?

-RESTATE REASONS-Your 2 characteristics

-BANG- Leave the reader hooked into the idea of you!

Peer Editing:1. Get a partner! 2. Read through their essay.3. Answer the following:

1. What’s good?2. Does the essay follow the

format?3. Does the essay flow?4. Does the writer use

complete/ complex sentences?

5. Give one piece of advice for the writer.

What is a Semicolon?What is a Semicolon?

Essentially, the semicolon is a cross between the two symbols—the period and the comma.

It pulls together independent clauses like a comma, but it allows each to retain its individual strength, like a period.

The semicolon is a staple of formal writing because it allows the writer to join thoughts with more sophistication than can be achieved using only the period and the comma.

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Basic Rules for Using Semicolons

Rule 1: Use the semicolon in place of a period to separate two sentences where the conjunction has been left out.

Examples:Examples:

Call me tomorrow; I will give you my answer then.

I have paid my dues; therefore, I expect all the privileges listed in the contract.

Rule 2a: Use a semicolon between independent clauses linked with a transitional expression.

2b: Do not use a semicolon in front of words such as therefore and however if they do not connect two complete sentence or are used as interrupters.

ExampleExample: I learned all the rules and regulations; however, I never really learned to control the ball.

Incorrect ExampleIncorrect Example: I would; therefore, like a response.

CorrectCorrect: I would, therefore, like a response.

More Rules….

Rule 3a: Use a comma or a semicolon before introductory words such as namely, that is, i.e., for example, e.g., or for stance when they are followed by a list of three or more items and preceded by a complete sentence.

ExampleExample: : You may be required to bring many items; e.g., sleeping bags, pans, and warm clothing. OR You may be required to bring many item, e.g., sleeping bags, pans, and warm clothing. (I.e. means that is; e.g. means for example.)

Rule 3b: If these introductory words are followed by fewer than three items, simply enclose them in commas.

ExampleExample: You may be required to bring many items, for instance, sleeping bags.

Rule 4: Use the semicolon to avoid confusion where commas already exist.

4a: Use the semicolon to separate units of a series when one or more of the units contain commas.

ExampleExample: This conference has people that have

come Boise, Idaho; Los Angeles, California; and Nashville, Tennessee.

4b: You may use a semicolon between two sentences that are joined by a conjunction but already have one or more commas within the first sentence.

ExampleExample: If she can, she will attempt that feat; and if her husband is able, he will be there to see her.

The comma

The comma is used to separate a list.

•My favorite animals are giraffes, dogs, cats, and birds.

It is also used between the date and the year.

•It was December 24, 2001.

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I will need the following items from

the store: bananas, grapes, watermelon, and lemons.

The colon is made with two periods.

It is used for time. 11:35 pm

It comes before a list.

Exit Slip Each of the following sentences needs either a comma

or a semicolon. Put in the necessary punctuation.COPY THE SENTENCE!

• 4. The hill was covered with wildflowers it was a beautiful sight.

• 5. As I turned around, I heard a loud thump for the cat had upset the goldfish bowl.