assignment 27: group two
TRANSCRIPT
1. The girl is walking on a pavement, which is a low angle of her feet in slow motion, then shows her point of view, then shows match on action
2. Then shows her walking toward a canal/alleyway where it’s quiet, then shows the characters distressed face before her flashback
3. First flashback- Putting down trophy dripping of blood4. Before next flashback, shows her splatter of blood marks on her face5. Second flashback- Cleaning up mess of blood in the bathroom6. The character is still walking, acting off edge, then shows her face before the
third flashback- Girl is in the shower washing blood off her clothes/body7. Fourth flashback- Shows her wrapping up evidence8. Fifth flashback- Shows her walking out of her house with a black bag9. Shows her point of view looking at the canal/road where she will throw the
bag10. Shows her walking and throwing bag away
Story In 10 Bullet Points
TimelineT
Linear, Chronological Time
Non-Linear (Flashbacks)
Titles/Credits (On black)
Camera Shots & Effects
Match on action, Slow paced editing, POV and Low angleShows character walking on the pavement
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Close-up, Wide shot and Mid shotThen shows her walking toward canal/alleyway and shows her distressed face
Extreme close-up and close-upShows her holding trophy dripping of blood
Close-up shotShows blood splatter all over her face
Wide shot, POV, Extreme close-up and Close-upShows her cleaning up mess of blood in bathroom
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TimelineTitles/Credits (On black)
Camera Shots & Effects
Linear, Chronological Time
Non-Linear (Flashbacks)
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Wide shot, Close-up and Extreme close-upGirl is in the shower washing blood off her clothes/body
Extreme close-up , Wide shot and close upShows her wrapping up evidence
Close-up and Wide shotShows her walking out of her house with a black bag
Wide shot, Close up, Tracking and Extreme close-upGirl is still walking rapidly, looking behind her, then shows her face
POV, Wide shot and Close upShows the road where she will throw the black bag in her perspective
Wide shot and Close upShows her throwing black bag away
Changes From Timelines
The previous timeline was fairly vague with little detail and information.
This timeline didn’t specify how many flashbacks we had or have a clear explanation of the flashbacks.
When we were able to describe what would happen within each flashback, it became easier for us to understand where to place them.
We were then able to explore the different special effects, props and camera shots would be appropriate for each scene.
Detail of five flashbacks