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Task 4 feedback and review By Keeley Barnaby

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Page 1: assessment for my advert

Task 4 feedback and review

By Keeley Barnaby

Page 2: assessment for my advert

My advert

This advert promotes Evian water

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Peer assessment

Berfin- At the end of the video when you had the logo showing the clip was too short. The background for the advert should have been white instead of still showing the advert in the background.

Emmanuel- The concept was good. The editing could have been better if the advert had faded into the scenes and add more transitions.

Veera-the dance was good and if there was a beat drop and a change the scene. Faster dance would have match the fast transition putting the bottle in a different location would have been better. The logo would have been better if it had faded in at the end of the video.

Rob(teacher)- the advert was good the ending could have been better if the logo was smaller and in a corner so it could still be seen and to have the advert still playing. The slow pace over the advert works for the product.

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Self-assessment

• My areas of improvement are adding more to my advert by making the choreography longer so I could have more footage to work from. I would use more transition.

• What went well for me is that the music flowed well with the video and the was the video flowed, to make it flow more smoothly I could add more transitions.