amy carter and jordan decarlo eced 4300b dr. root spring 2009
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Amy Carter and Jordan DeCarloECED 4300BDr. RootSpring 2009
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Amy CarterPrewriting
GPS: ELA5W4 The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student a. Plans and drafts independently and
resourcefully. PLO: Students will plan their prewriting
using a graphic organizer.
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Form-Diamante PoetryPurpose- to contrast oppositesTopic- favorite foodAudience- classmatesPlan- graphic organizer
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Written in a diamond shapeSeven contrasting linesSynonyms and antonyms
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Line 1: one noun as the subject Line 2: two adjectives describing the
subject Line 3: three verbs ending in ing Line 4: Four nouns two related to line 1 and
two related to line 7 Line 5: three verbs ending in ing about the
opposite of the subject Line 6: two adjectives describing the
opposite Line 7: one noun opposite of the subject
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Plan for writing Graphic organizer
Your topic is favorite food Obvious opposite
Ex. If your favorite food is your subject, then your opposite would be your least favorite food.
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1. List one noun as the subject of the poem:
Summer(Line 1)
2. List two adjectives describing the subject:
Hot Sunny(Line 2)
3. List three action verbs (participles) ending in –ing related to the subject:
Swimming Tanning Sweating(Line 3)
4. List two nouns related to the subject:
Shorts T-Shirts(Half of Line 4)
5. List an antonym (opposite) for the subject:
Winter(Line 7)
6. List two adjectives describing the antonym:
Cold Gray(Line 6)
7. List three action verbs (participles) ending in –ing related to the subject:
Freezing Snowing Sledding(Line 5)
8. List two nouns related to the antonym:
Pants Coats(Half of Line 4)
Root, T. L. (2007, Spring). Our Published Pieces: ECED 4300. Retrieved April 1, 2009, from Valdosta State University, Department of Early Childhood and Special Education, Dr. Tonja Root’s Web site: http://www.valdosta.edu/~troot/PublishedPieces/poetry_&_correspondence_F_08.htm
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Babywrinkled tiny
crying wetting sleepingrattles diapers money house
caring working lovingsmart helpful
Adult
Tompkins, Gail E. (2009). Language Arts: Patterns of Practice. (p. 381). Upper Saddle River, New Jersey: Pearson Education Inc.
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Class collaboratedWill provide assistanceTopic: Day and nightShared pen method
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Fill out graphic organizer on your own
Topic: Favorite food
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Jordan DeCarloDrafting GPS: ELA5W4 The student
consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student a. Plans and drafts independently and
resourcefully. PLO: Students will write a rough draft
for diamante poetry.
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Written in a diamond shapeSeven contrasting linesSynonyms and antonyms
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Line 1: one noun as the subject Line 2: two adjectives describing the
subject Line 3: three verbs ending in ing Line 4: Four nouns two related to line 1 and
two related to line 7 Line 5: three verbs ending in ing about the
opposite of the subject Line 6: two adjectives describing the
opposite Line 7: one noun opposite of the subject
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Write a diamante poemTransfer ideas from first graphic
organizerFill in all lines of graphic organizerNot perfect
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Summer one word – noun
Hot Sunnytwo adjective describing words for noun
Sweating Tanning Swimmingthree -ing words showing action for noun
Shorts T-Shirts Pants Coatsfour nouns (two relating to noun; two relating to
antonym)Freezing Snowing Sledding
three -ing words showing action for antonymCold Gray
two adjectives describing antonymWinter
one word – antonym of noun
Jordan School Districts Elementary Comprehensive Balanced Literacy. (2009). Diamante Style Poem. Graphic Organizer. Retreived April 1, 2009 from
http://t4.jordan.k12.ut.us/cbl/images/tools/diamanteform.pdf
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Smoothsilky soft
sliding soothing strokingglass milkshake splinter gravelscratching pricking stumbling
lumpy rockyRough
The Learning Place: Genre Project (2009). Diamante Poems. Retrieved April 2, 2009 from,http://www.learningplace.com.au/deliver/content.asp?pid=36847
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Class collaboratedTeacher guidance Shared penContinue with day and night topic
From prewriting plan
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Your turn to draft a poemCreate a draft using graphic
organizerFill in the blanks according to
directionsContinue with topic favorite food