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Attention please!《 2011 江苏高考说明》高考英语书面表达示例 2--- 看图作文：看图作文的 “图”不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图片、照片、图表等情景材料。考生们可根据图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，自己组织文字，进行描述、叙述、比较或表达思想观。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但应避免仅根据提示文字作简单翻译。

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Writing based on cartoons

Are you familiar with this cartoon?

What abilities should we have?

1. 读图

3. 谋篇

2. 解意

Ⅰ. 读图： Topics of cartoons

Topics of cartoons

Environmental/Natural

problems

Social phenomenon

Attitudes towards life

Ⅱ. 解意 (theme)-----to the point 注意 : 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息 (clues)， 切记要认真阅读！！！

1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 (angle)

２ . 联系生活，明晰主旨 (theme)

下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象，请你根据对 这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。

Example1._______

角度comparison主旨educationinequality

• The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.

角度criticize

主旨

The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.

Example2

Judge the themes of the followingcartoons as quickly as possible.

Come on! Choose me!

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People lack communication.

Picture1

Protect animals.No buying, no killing.

Picture2

People can’t afford heavy medical fees.

Picture 3

Picture 4

One false move may lose the game.Look before you leap.

Money can’t buy everything.Health is the best wealth.

Picutre5

下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告招画，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？——————

if unexpectedcan’t foreseeprotect ourselvesbuy insurance

Picture6

The advertisement above shows us that there are always some unexpected “ifs” in our life, but not all of us can foresee them clearly. So buying insurance for life is likely the best way to protect ourselves from a deadly “if”.

Conclusion:When it comes to attitudes towards life, usingproper sayings makes sense.

Ⅲ. 谋篇 ---organization

Step1. Description

step2. Analysis

Step3. Solutions

发现问题

解决问题

分析问题

Step 1 Description（人称 / 时态）To what degree should we describe the cartoon?

Organization

Examplea country boycryinglong for educationa city boyenjoy all the benefitsof education

As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture,In the picture, there are… The picture shows a common phenomenon.……

Sentence structures:

_______________________________, a country boy is crying helpless in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education, in contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits.

As is vividly shown in the picture,

Step2 Analysis( 联系实际分析 )

( facts / reasons/results…)

Sentence structures1.What are the reasons for this phenomenon?

2.It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.

3.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…

4.The picture indicates that we…/Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…

5.This is a ironic ( 讽刺的 ) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among……

Clues ：描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。

Indicate:education inequalityFacts:drop out of schoolsuffer fromlow standards of…comparativelybetter opportunitiesResults:lower enrollment ratesworsen the problem

Example

The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who managed to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities and academic quantities. Comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, school in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem of educational inequality.

●As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion,

From my point of view,…

Only in this way can…./Only if…, can we…

Step 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions)

It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to…●The government should make laws to…●The media should appeal for …●We should raise people’s awareness of…●Everyone should make great efforts to…

从大到小从意识到行动

The governmentThe mediabe aware ofOnly if…social justiceharmonious society

Example

To solve this problem , the government should spend more money on the improvement of education in rural areas. Meanwhile, the media can appeal for the public donations for rural education. Moreover, all people in the community should be aware of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever to help. Only if we do these can we have more social justice and thus make our society more harmonious

Practice 目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费

而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“ Health Care” 为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。

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Clues: 简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。

Steps

Contents

Description Analysis Solutions

an old mansuffer fromgo tohospitalmedical billcan’t affordanother attach…

Results:1.in debt2.bear the pain3.wait for death…

1.reduce medicalexpenses2.build upmedical insurance/caresystem…

Health Care

(Description) From the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble/attack. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill with $5,0000 from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldn’t stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could afford ． It’s really another heart attack for him.

Sample

Analysis

At present, many people can’t afford heavy medical fees. (Results) Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care . Worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the last day of their life. What a pity!

Solutions To solve the problem,we strongly call for the medical expenses to be reduced ． The government should build up medical insurance system ,and try its best to explore and develop a new health care so that everyone will be able to enjoy their life as long as possible. /Only in this way, can we enjoy our life as long as possible.

Whatever the picture is, just remember:

Proper description

Accurate analysis

Reasonable solutionsOnly if you keep these rules in mind, can you make it.

Let’s draw conclusion

Consolidation

第五部分 书面表达 (满分 25分 )下图描述的是全球环境问题。请仔细观察这幅漫画，用英语写一篇短文，阐明漫画中所反映的问题，并提出解决此问题的方法 (至少三点 )。

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Consolidation

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DescriptionAnalysisSolution

From the picture, we can see that pollution is posing a threat to our earth, which comes in many ways. Millions of chimneys of the factories are pouring heavy somok into air, which causes serious air pollution. A large amount of waste water from the factories pollutes water, making our rivers fishless and our water unfit to drink and swim in. Furthermore, a lot of trees have been cut down without proper plans, which contributes to the soil being washed away. It seems that we really have no clean place to live(Description + Analysis)

The pollution is so serious that we have to find effective solutions to it. As far as I am concerned, the government should pass laws to reduce polluted air. Some measures should be taken to purify the water before it is poured into the rivers of the seas. We should plant more trees to keep the soil in place. What’s more, people should be further educated to realize the importance of environmental protection. Only in this way, we will have a clean and tidy environment.

(Solutions)

It is well known that drunken driving has been the leading cause for road accidents, but some people still drive after drinking.

1.What are the reasons for the phenomenon.2.What causes drivers to drive after drinking?3.The reasons why people drive after drinkingare as follows:4.The lack of safety awareness is the direct

reason why there is/exists so much drunken driving.

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Drunken driving is a great danger to both our society and the drivers.1.As far as I am concerned/In my opinion…2.It is necessary to forbid…from…3.It’s time that we took action/measures to4.Everyone should be responsible for…5.The government should make strict lawsabout it and punish those who…6.Educate people about the importance of safe driving /security to raise people’s awareness of safety.7.Only in this way can we reduce road accident…/I believe…