10 04-2012 the writing process rev vocab continued

Bellwork"Reader response drives revision."

- Kelly Gallagher

One stage of writing is sharing & responding. WRITE 3-5 sentences about how a writer might use this to help their writing.

Today’s agenda·Bellwork - Reader Response QUICK WRITE·Think - Pair - Share Reader Response·The Writing Process·REV Vocabulary Survey Says·Today's Menu·Wrap Up

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Think...Pair...Share"Reader response drives revision."

- Kelly Gallagher

Think - You wrote answer down.Pair - Pair up with your shoulder

partnerShare - Share your answer...

How do responses help?Does it?

The Writing ProcessWriters

REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

Which of the following behaviors would you describe as maniacal?·running around and yelling in class·swimming in very deep water·laughing at a funny TV show

REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

Which activity would you do painstakingly?·writing a research report about rainforests·telling a classmate the latest gossip·selecting a gift for a friend's birthday

REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

Which person would you expect to have a lilting voice?·a sports announcer at a wrestling match·a mother putting her child to sleep·a professional singer giving a concert

REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

In which setting is it important to show refinement?·at a concert·at a school assembly·at a restaurant

REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

Which situation would you describe as pedestrian?·walking home from school·standing in the lunch line in the cafeteria·being chased by wolves in the forest

REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

What would infuriate you?·getting chosen last for a team·finding out that you are a finalist in an art contest·not receiving an invitation to your best friend's party

REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

Which of these behaviors would you describe as condescending?·a friend who won't talk to you after an argument·a friend who ignores you when his other friends are around·a friend who refuses to notice you because you're wearing pink socks

REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

Which of the following would make you feel contrite?·borrowing someone's favorite CD and then losing it·cheering someone on in a basketball game·telling someone that you dislike his or her new clothes

Questions?

On this dateAfter the resignation of the police chief, a small town in New Mexico was left with a single law enforcement officer: ______.a) DMV clerk Dottie Perkinsb) DHS Secretary Jeanette Napolitanoc) College intern Tommy Milchner d) Some dog named Nikka

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On this dateAfter the resignation of the police chief, a small town in New Mexico was left with a single law enforcement officer: ______.a) DMV clerk Dottie Perkinsb) DHS Secretary Jeanette Napolitanoc) College intern Tommy Milchner d) Some dog named Nikka

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Today’s menu·Chicken Bites·Whole Wheat Roll·PB&J Uncrustable·Specialty Salad·Steamed Cauliflower·Green Beans·Seasonal Fresh Fruit·Milk

How do responses help?Does it?

How do responses help?Does it?

How do responses help?Does it?

How do responses help?Does it?

How do responses help?Does it?

How do responses help?Does it?

REV Vocabulary - Survey Says

In which setting is it important to show refinement?·at a concert·at a school assembly·at a restaurant