A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: Joe

General A very good start to the year, you have created a body of work that shows clear cohesion between the two part s of unit 3. Your visual work is strong but you must make sure all visual documentation is clearly visible to be able to see fully your thought processes.

Task Assessment Criteria Covered

Feedback AO band

Leaflet AO1 A good leaflet task, you have clearly thought about the layout and design of different leaflets and the fact you have been to exhibitions to find them shows a commitment to the task. Your research demonstrates you’re a confident ability to glean significant information from your chosen sources. However You need to put your final design up on weebly as at present it looks incomplete.

AO1: Fluent

Practical Work and Gallery responses.

AO1AO3

Your initial sports day shots are excellent and give the viewer a real insight into the day. The different angles and focal points all add to this being a strong body of work. The journey works well you have clearly thought out and pre-visualised the images before you have taken them. I think you could have potentially gone even further with the distorted reality latter on in the series but on the whole a good body of work. The documentary series is not as strong you shown us the journey to the site but we don’t see any of the actual event!

AO1: basicAO3: confident

Observational Starting Points

AO3AO2

Excellent work the photograph that you have taken of the homeless man is outstanding. I would like it if you could put all your shots up on weebly this just enables the examiner an insight into your visual thought process. Also

AO3: ConfidentAO2: Fluent

you should put up the work of Micheal Heffernan as a contextual reference. I am really pleased that you have responded so well to the brief set in class.

Research Starting Points

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