A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: Daniel

General Slow starts to the year but you are beginning to show signs of catching up and moving your photography forward. A successful A2 photography student must demonstrate both independence and drive it is essential that you really start to push yourself to achieve the grade that you are capable of.

Task Assessment Criteria Covered

Feedback AO band

Leaflet AO1 An incomplete leaflet task, you have clearly thought about the layout and design of one leaflet but it would have been good to see some more observations and the fact you have been to exhibitions to find them shows a commitment to the task.

AO1: Competent

Practical Work and Gallery responses.

AO1AO3

Some really strong images here Daniel the shot of James looking out of the tent is very strong. However you must make sure that you are taking more images and you need to put them all up on your weebly. The examiner needs to see all your visual thought processes and they do this by seeing all your pictures. It is a shame that you didn’t undertake the second part of the summer brief that would have involved you created a storey that you had pre-visualised.

AO1: ConfidentAO3: confident

Observational Starting Points

AO3AO2

As yet no work so unable to give a mark AO3: NAAO2: NA

Research Starting Points

AO1 AO1: