a kinesthetic makeover in writing:
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A Kinesthetic Makeover in Writing:. Tearing Down and Rearranging to Reveal. survey on learning styles. What is kinesthetic learning?. Improving Essays. at the sentence level (Teresa) at the paragraph level ( AnnMarie ). Improving Essays: Sentence Level. via participial phrases. - PowerPoint PPT PresentationTRANSCRIPT
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Tearing Down and Rearranging to Reveal
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survey on learning styles
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at the sentence level (Teresa)at the paragraph level (AnnMarie)
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via appositive phrases
via participial phrases
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re-identify
nouns, not adjectives
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Bush Both Obama
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changing a verb to an adjective usually ends in –ing can end in –ed or –en
twist twisting road help helping hand break broken glass stun stunned silence
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Bart Simpson caused the mishap. exasperated Marge. outsmarted Homer. rode his skateboard in the street. set the school on fire.
Causing the mishap, Bart Simpson__________.
Bart Simpson __________, causing the mishap.
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*can help build sentence fluency
*NOT REAL WRITING—IS SKILL BUILDING THAT IS ADJACENT TO WRITING
*teacher should model decision making skills
*students move from oral rehearsal to written transcription
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Options: Use sentence strips. Create your own with some help from
sentence strips. Create your own.
And for the grammarian warrior. . . Create your own. Rewrite each sentence
you create by moving, adding, or eliminating phrases. To what extent is the meaning of your sentence changed?
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Nina
Before: Odysseus makes several heroic moves. Taking care of himself and crew for twenty years is amazing.
After: At Castle Rock the conch is broken, showing there is no more organization left on the island.
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Isabella
Before: Taunting the Cyclops, Odysseus angers him and causes him to throw a “hilltop” after the boat.
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Isabella, cont.
Post: While Romeo is in black most of the time, showing his brooding attitude about love, Juliet is almost always clothed in white, conveying her innocence and purity.
Post: In the [film] shot, the sun represents Juliet, or the filler of the void in Romeo’s dark heart.
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*kindergarten *thesis*paragraphs