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Eng101_FA15SEMICOLONS, COLONS

PEER RE VIEW CAUSAL ANALYSIS



Semicolon use between two complete

sentences that are closely related

My family is Jewish. We celebrate Chanukah but not CMy family is Jewish; we celebrate Chanukah but not Ch

I like pie; however, I like pizza more.

My family is Jewish; not Christian.



Semicolon use between two complete

sentences that are closely related

My dad is a coach at the university. We get free tickets to any sports evesee.

My dad is a coach at the university. We have some cousins who live in Te

I have three dogs, and two of them are golden retrievers.

I have three dogs; and two of them are golden retrievers.

NEVER USE A SEMICOLON WITH A COORDINATING CONJUNCTION!!!



Semicolon use in lists already containing

punctuation

We saw Meg, captain of the basketball team, Avery, captain of tteam, Ryan, captain of the crew, and Archer, captain of the volle

We saw Meg, captain of the basketball team; Avery, captain of tteam; Ryan, captain of the crew; and Archer, captain of the volle

He ate a baked potato with sour cream, cheese, and bacon; a stesteak sauce, caramelized onions, and mushrooms; and ice creamwhipped cream, fudge, and jimmies.




punctuation

He ate a baked potato with sour cream, cheese, and basteak with A-1 steak sauce, caramelized onions, and m

and ice cream with whipped cream, fudge, and jimmie

He ate a baked potato with sour cream, cheese, and basteak with A-1 steak sauce, caramelized onions, and mand ice cream with whipped cream, fudge, and jimmie




punctuation

I love the words brouhaha, googaloo, and flabbergastnames Vanessa, Charlotte, and Cassandra, the states I

Illinois, but not the foods anchovies, olives, and eggpla

I love the words brouhaha, googaloo, and flabbergastnames Vanessa, Charlotte, and Cassandra; the states IIllinois; but not the foods anchovies, olives, and eggpla



Colon

A complete sentence ALWAYS comes be

After the colon is either another complete sentenThis sentence is grammatically correct: I wonder if

actually wolf down their pizzas the way I wolf dow

or a list.

I want to travel to the following countries: Brazil,

Greece, Russia, and Australia.



Colon Good or Bad)

A complete sentence ALWAYS comes be

These are the ingredients: flour, eggs, sugar, milk,chocolate.

There’s only one sport for me: alligator wrestling.

I want to see the new ninja movie: and the new Spmovie, too.



Colon Disclaimer...kinda

if the first word after a colon begins a complete sentence, th

be capitalized or lowercase. Both are correct.

I’m sure you know the old saying about apples: anday keeps the doctor away.

I’m sure you know the old saying about apples: An

day keeps the doctor away.



The good doctor’s newsletters...

We no longer need to surround ourselves in pink tfrom cancer; because we innately understand that

destined for health not disease.



Causal AnalysesESSAY DISCUSSION

PEER REVIEW



Discuss sample essay

Decide the criteria for a good causal analysisUse the rubric to grade it!



ach body paragraph should…

* Identify element (topic sentence)* summarize part of essay illustrating that element

* give direct text from essay (quote)

* Explain how this example shows the element’s effect

(concluding sentence)



Peer Review Causal Analysis

On peer review sheet, write

Reviewed by: (insert your name)Summary author: (peer’s name)

Exchange essays.

Read the essay and complete the peer review sheet.Give both to author (your peer).



For Wednesday…

Read pgs 263 – 301 about argumentative tech

Essay #3 Causal Analysis and newsletter mullig

Monday 11/2



For Thursday…

Read pgs 263 – 301 about argumentative tech

Essay #3 Causal Analysis and newsletter mullig

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