1 st prize. systems is my favorite class. it is easy and fun. psychology class isn ’ t hard. it...
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1st prize
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Systems is my favorite class. It is easy and fun. Psychology class isn’t hard. It can be enjoyable. We do not get to do online discussion there. I love to work online. I just wrote a new discussion response. Here it is!
Systems is my favorite class; it is easy and fun. Psychology class isn’t hard, and it can be enjoyable, but we do not get to do online discussion there. I love to work online; in fact, I just wrote a new discussion response, so here it is!
My Essay
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3 Ways to Make Compound Sentences
Join two sentences with a comma and a coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS) FOR AND NOR BUT OR YET SO
Join two complete sentences with a semicolon
Join two complete sentences with a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb or transitional expression
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1. To get rid of short, choppy sentences, call in the FANBOYS!
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Punctuation with FANBOYS
Put commas before FANBOYS, not after.
Don’t use comma if there is only a piece of a complete sentence on either side.
I love writing essays and studying grammar.
Do use comma when there is a complete sentence on both sides of FANBOYS.
I love writing essays , and I love studying grammar.
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2. To get rid of short, choppy
sentences, use a semicolon ; Semicolons act like periods; they bring a
sentence to a full stop.
Semicolons don’t act like commas. Semicolons are much stronger than commas. They can keep two whole sentences apart!
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3. To get rid of short, choppy
sentences, use a semicolon and a
conjunctive adverb or transitional
expression. When you’re joining two complete sentences this way, be sure to put a semicolon BEFORE the joining word and a comma AFTER.
We were able to meet the proposal’s deadline ; however , we had to deliver it by hand.
I know my grammar perfectly ; therefore , I never worry about my essay grades.
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So now you know all you need to know about making compound
sentences! To join two complete sentences, use a comma plus one of the FANBOYS FOR AND NOR BUT OR YET SO
To join two complete sentences, use a semicolon all by itself
To join two complete sentences, use a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb or transitional expression