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When class starts…
Have a writing utensil and study guide on your desk.
Finish Questions from Yesterday
Question 18
What images remain in your mind after reading “Sonnet 75”?
Question 18
What images remain in your mind after reading “Sonnet 75”?
Question 19
How does the woman in the poem react when the speaker writes her name in the sand?
Question 19
How does the woman in the poem react when the speaker writes her name in the sand?
The woman says that it is useless for the poet to try to immortalize her because she is mortal and will disappear, just like her name written in the sand.
Question 20
What does the speaker believe that their love will endure?
Question 20
What does the speaker believe that their love will endure?
The speaker thinks their love will endure because his poem will forever immortalize his love.
Question 21
Why do you think the speaker in “Sonnet 75” wants to immortalize his love? Explain your thinking.
Question 21
Why do you think the speaker in “Sonnet 75” wants to immortalize his love? Explain your thinking.
As a gift to show his love. To celebrate her rare virtues. To inspire future lovers.
Question 22
“Where when as deaths hall all the world subdue,
Our love shall live, and later life renew.”
Do you agree with the speaker that love can overcome death?
Question 22
“Where whenas deaths hall all the world subdue,
Our love shall live, and later life renew.”
Do you agree with the speaker that love can overcome death? Yes: memory becomes an inspiration No: memory can never replace the actual
experience.
Narrative Story
Big Picture
Next week, you will have an essay due.
It is called a Personal Narrative, and we will work on it for the rest of the week.
It will be due on Wednesday of next week. Wednesday, October 6.
What makes a good story? --2
What makes a good story? --3
Narrative
A narrative is any type of writing that is primarily concerned with relating an event or a series of events.
It is a snapshot!
Pictures
They are amazing!
Snapshot
Snapshot
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
Quick Summary:
Ben had a friend named Eddie Walker. He admitted himself to a mental hospital.
His friends came to cheer him up at the hospital. They brought him pictures, so he could remember the good times.
“Eddie Walker”
http://www.myspace.com/music/ben-folds-13317795/songs/eddie-walker-35945230
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
Won't you smile you look so shocked!Put the nametag on your smock.We've come to see you,Eddie Walker
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
We may pack a little tight.The girl up front saysit's all right.And look! There's more of usstill getting off the bus.We wish you'd come back home with us.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
Eddie Walker,this is your life.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
This one's you when you were small, andyou're learning how to walk.They'd pick you upand you keep falling down.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
There you are with Aunt Louise.You're bouncing on her knees.Remember all those trees behind the garden?They’re gone; they all got cut downwhen she died.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
Eddie Walker, this is your life.You never had a son or a wife.You sure had a hell of a time.Eddie Walker, this is your life.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
This one's you and Mary Jo.Well, she couldn't come.She says “hello.”No, Eddie Walker,she doesn't hate your guts.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
It's just the whole thingshook her up.How they picked you up,and you kept falling down.Eddie Walker—this is your life.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
Eddie Walker, this is your life.You never had a coat or a tie.You never had a reason to cry.
Whoa oh oh oh oh whoa
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
This whole stack and all of theseare your semester overseas.
We're gonna leave you,Eddie Walker.
Meaning behind the Song
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
Won't you smile you look so shocked!Put the nametag on your smock.We've come to see you,Eddie Walker
Meaning: Smile! I know you’re shocked to see us. Put this nametag on, so you can leave your room. We’ve come to see you.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
We may pack a little tight.The girl up front saysit's all right.And look! There's more of usstill getting off the bus.We wish you'd come back home with us.
Meaning: The lady at the front desk said it’s okay that there are so many of us. Look at all these people that care so much about you. We wish you’d come home with us.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
Eddie Walker,this is your life.
Meaning: We are going to show you how great your life is by showing you all of these old pictures.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
This one's you when you were small, andyou're learning how to walk.They'd pick you upand you keep falling down.
Meaning: They show him a snapshot of when he was learning to walk.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
There you are with Aunt Louise.You're bouncing on her knees.Remember all those trees behind the garden?They’re gone; they all got cut downwhen she died.
Meaning: Remember having fun with our favorite aunt? She died. Life is going on without you.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
Eddie Walker, this is your life.You never had a son or a wife.You sure had a hell of a time.Eddie Walker, this is your life.
Meaning: These snapshots represent your life. You still have so much to do! Don’t get us wrong– you had one heck of a time!
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five This one's you and Mary Jo.
Well, she couldn't come.She says “hello.”No, Eddie Walker,She doesn't hate your guts.
Meaning: He was dating a girl before he admitted himself. He asks if she hates him.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
It's just the whole thing'sshook her up.How they picked you up,and you kept falling down.Eddie Walker, this is your life.
Meaning: It just shook Mary Jo up a little bit. Every time someone tried to help you out, you resisted. But, we shouldn’t talk about that. THIS is your life– look at these snapshots!
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
Eddie Walker, this is your life.You never had a coat or a tie.You never had a reason to cry.whoa oh oh oh whoa
Meaning: You are here, but you don’t really have a reason to be. Everyone goes through hard times. Whoa oh oh oh whoa.
“Eddie Walker”– Ben Folds Five
This whole stack and all of theseare your semester overseas.We're gonna leave you,Eddie Walker.
Meaning: These are all of the pictures from when you went on adventures overseas! Look how happy you were. We are gonna go.
As a class…
We are going to write a story about one of these stanzas.
It will be one paragraph long. We should write about the moment in time they are discussing in the stanza.
Write a paragraph…
This one's you and Mary Jo.Well, she couldn't come.She says “hello.”No, Eddie Walker,She doesn't hate your guts.
Good Story?
Does this have everything we believe a short story should have?
Snapshots
Think of a picture you could write a story about.
*** Write a couple of ideas down in your journal.***
Homework
Just bring your binder tomorrow.